Add a comment that you read the storyboards from the bottom upwards! Don't forget that the last sequence needs you to show clearly that the two don't get on normally - maybe have a shot of each stalking off and muttering something nasty about teh other under their breath (but loud enough so we can hear it!) - also show lots of angry glares at each other. Could you use dress to show they belong to two groups who don't normally get on in high school movies e.g. geek and jock?? Not sure about where you position your title screen - feels better at end of sequence... Where are your risk assessments and props lists, cast lists etc. (Mrs D)
READ THIS FROM THE BOTTOM UPWARDS
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Add a comment that you read the storyboards from the bottom upwards! Don't forget that the last sequence needs you to show clearly that the two don't get on normally - maybe have a shot of each stalking off and muttering something nasty about teh other under their breath (but loud enough so we can hear it!) - also show lots of angry glares at each other. Could you use dress to show they belong to two groups who don't normally get on in high school movies e.g. geek and jock?? Not sure about where you position your title screen - feels better at end of sequence... Where are your risk assessments and props lists, cast lists etc. (Mrs D)
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